Thursday, March 26, 2009

breathe a little....

a dream is born....
a desire thus born.....
time passes...
efforts shine.....
pride knocks.....
dream is nearing.......
finally it is there......
to be rejoiced ....
but, it is forgotten....
for another dream....
hearts sinks.....
cribs forever.....
things mess up......

the dream was never lived....
the dream which was so special...
now down in the heaps....
of a cluttered mind....


dream a dream....
live a dream.....
take a breath....
smell the freshness....
sense the joy around....
then march ahead...
to dream again....
dont stop dreaming....
but also, breathe a little....
be happy...a little...
smile a little.....

21 comments:

Ashmeet said...

Beautiful!!!

Asha said...

Beautiful thoughts. Dream is what keep us going, as long as our dreams are practical and acheivable! ;D

Satans Darling™ said...

Loved it! especially the way it ends!

Mads said...

nice one...the last paragraph was great...
why suddenly inspired to write on this topic? :D :D

Keshi said...

ty for stopping by my blog Aditi!

Tho I never knew u b4 I left, ur words of wisdom along with the others', helped me to make a decision and Im already bak :) TY!

I love the way u write too! Absolutely deep and beautiful.

Keshi.

Aditi..............:) said...

Thanks Chaitali....

Aditi..............:) said...

Hey arshita.....thanks a lot...yes the end of this post is what is to be remembered in life.....

Aditi..............:) said...

Madds dear....no reason...just thought of this gloomy blogville...and wrote it to motivate everyone of us!!! Dream on!

Aditi..............:) said...

Thanks Keshi...your comments mean a lot! And great to know that you are back......will keep reading your posts....take care and stay happy! :)

Aditi..............:) said...

Hey Asha....yes well, truly said!! :)

Suyog said...

really nicely compiled..................kaha se aaya yeh thoughts ??

keep writing in this gud mood ..............i guess u watched JUMBO !!!!

MultiMenon said...

Awesome!! U have managed to bring in some much needed light into my mind..love ya sis.. :) and keep up the good work..

Take care..hope als well with u by now.. :)

Nikhil

Aditi..............:) said...

thanks suyog.....nope i dint watch Jumbo...but just thought of everyones comments...:)

Aditi..............:) said...

Thanks Nikhil!! :)

A S said...

hiiiii

very nice, we tend to mess up things..we start something new with loads of excitement then leave it mid way !

:D

Aditi..............:) said...

We never live in the present, either we dream bout the future or ponder the past....isnt it equally important to think bout the present and enjoy it !! :P

Phoenix said...

beautiful and encouraging words there.. :)

im finally blog rolling you.. i keep losing ur link but this time there wont be such a problem.. :)

Aditi..............:) said...

Hey sweety......thanks...btw i still couldnt find my blog in your list :(
anyways...go thru my earlier posts and give me your feedback...:P

workhard said...

Love the last verse, gives a little hope..

Write poetry

Aditi..............:) said...

@workhard, Thanks :)

Scribbler said...

good one

jus need to pay a lil attn towards the liberal usage of ellipses

keep it rollin;)